My Comment toward My First Presentation

       After watching the clip of my first presentation, I conclude my speech. There are both pros and cons.
       For the optimistic part, it is cheerful that my stage manner really makes perfect. There is no obvious symptom for the stage- fright, such as holding hands anxiously or  gazing merely on the floor. In most of time , I can really  find confident on the stage, demonstrating my thesis clearly. Even though confronting errors, I can still fix the problem then bypass them smoothly. Perhaps I should contribute my well- done stage manner to the one- year training in English Department, NCU.
     However, evidently, I should also conquer some of the drawbacks in my presentation. After viewing the full video, I found my ability in composing words on stage still much in desire. Namely, I'm not extemporaneous enough. There is lots of redundant  phrase in my speech. Meanwhile, the words I selected are often monotonous and shallow.  All these problem have greatly compromised my good acquaintance in stage manner.
       Hence for my next presentation, what I really should take to my priority are to form an exact script and to practice more. I believe for the next time, I will do a better job.